會考英語作文範文及評析:記敘文3

會考英語作文範文及評析:記敘文3

【習作要求】

根據中文意思和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給的英文提示詞語必須都用上，句數不限；中文提示內容不必逐句翻譯。

一個雨天，李莉乘出租車回家。在車裏她發現司機在學英語。他對李莉說了些什麼? 此事對你學習英語有何啓發? 爲支持北京奧運你打算做些什麼?

(1) one rainy day, go home, by taxi

(2) in the car, find, was learning English

(3) said to Li Li, I, weak, English, when at school, now work hard, to help with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games

(4) I think... to show support （n.支持）for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games

【會考英語作文範文】

One rainy day, Li Li went home by taxi. In the car she found (that) the driver was learning English. He said to Li Li: "I was weak in English when I was at school. Now I'm working hard at it to help with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games." I think I should learn from the driver. English is very important to us because it is widely used all over the world. As a student, I'll do my best to learn English well at school. And I'm going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.

【名師點評】

第一句很重要，以便確定全文時態。句與句之間要連貫。關鍵句要用上，如：I'm going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.

(1) 格式：簡介

(2) 人稱：第三人稱

(3) 時態：一般現在時，一般過去時，一般將來時

(4) 短語、句式、句型：短語與句式已給出，句型包括簡單句、直接引語、賓語從句