2017年大學聯考全國1卷英語作文範文及賞析三

2017年大學聯考全國1卷英語作文範文及賞析三
　　Dear Leslie,
　　How's it going? Have you absorbed all the knowledge I taught you last time? Now let me tell you the information of next lesson.
　　I will give the lesson on next Saturday morning, from 8:00 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. at 101 Room in the teaching building in our school.
　　We are going to learn about Tang poetry, which is an extremely important part of not only Chinese language but also Chinese culture. What you need to do in advance is to know briefly about the history of Tang Dynasty. You can consult the Internet or the books I gave you. Besides, don't forget to review what you have learned before.
　　I am looking forward to our meeting. See you next week!
　　Yours,
　　Li Hua.
　　點評：本文要點覆蓋全面，行文流暢，有額外的細節添加，結構清晰緊湊，語法錯誤較少，運用了一定的複雜句式，如定語從句which is an extremely important part…，主語從句What you need to do in advance is…等等；同時有一定的詞彙亮點如absorb，extremely替換了very等。
　　建議：句式方面，可以適當再增加一些高級句式。