Hun in spring1000字作文

Winter was gone,Spring favorite season is spring,because it's very beautiful. Lovely girl-chun, strode the world came to light steps, and that picture will be a very lively scene in all directions then came, the whole world like a long sleep just wakened spring,the weather is aways sunny and rainy,it's not cold and not hot,it's warmer and warmer. And the trees become green and the flowers give off fragrance There are many butterflies and bees over the flowers. The butterflies are dancing and the bees are singing. Sometimes it rains. It usually rains quietly. The rain moistens the trees and the flowers. I think they may say, “We’re very thirsty. The rain is very good. It can help us.” What a beautiful scene! The birds are singing in the sky,they are animals will go out to people like to go out and enjoy the sunshine. I like to fly kites,plant trees and see the beautiful flowers. Spring is planting dreams season is colorful,I think it's a wonderful season. Let’s hug in spring!

修改後：
My favorite season is spring, because it's very spring, everything comes back to life after the long cold sun shines brightly, and the weather is always sunny. It's not cold and not hot, and it becomes warmer and trees become green and the flowers give off fragrance. There are many butterflies and bees over the flowers. The butterflies are dancing and the bees are singing. Sometimes it rains. It usually rains quietly. The rain moistens the trees and the flowers. What a beautiful scene!The birds are singing in the sky happily. Many people like going out and enjoy the sunshine. I like flying kites, planting trees and looking at the beautiful flowers. Spring is colorful. I think it's a wonderful season. Let’s hug in spring!

修改老師：Crystal老師

七年級:桑宇晶