Hug in spring1200字作文

HerecomesSpring.

Theworldcomestoitself.

ItookmyluggageandhadanextemporaneoustravellastSunday.

Firstly,Ihadabiglunchwhichcontainedvariousfoodssuchasfish,chicken,wewerehavinglunch,sangattractivesongswhichmadeusunbuttoned.

Inmoderncitylife,wearealwaysworriedaboutourpersonalaffairs,,Imadebestofthisenjoyabletimetoenjoymylife.

Secondly,ersweresinging,birdsweresinging,ngivepeoplehopeandenergytostruggleforourgoals.

Asawill-graduatedstudent,Ilearnedalotfromthistrip.

AsIsaid,andboringthoughCollegeentranceexaminationis,Iwillencouragemyselftostruggletotheend,justascockroaches.

Fighting!

修改後：

The spring is coming; and the weather becomes warmer and warmer. LastSunday, I went outing with my parents.

First,nthatmountainismuch fresherthanthatinthe city. Therewehadabiglunchwhichcontainedvariousfoodssuchasfish,chicken,muttonandsoon. Whenwe werehavinglunch,birdskeptflying aroundus. Theysang songswhichmadeus happier. At that moment, my father said, “Inmoderncitylife,wearealwaysworriedaboutourpersonalaffairs,andhardlyhavetimetorelax ,let’s makebestuse ofthisenjoyabletimetoenjoyourselves.” Then,sweresinging,evenfisharesinging.

Springisreally ngivepeoplehopeandenergytostrugglefortheir goals. Springstartslivesandputs andboringthoughcollegeentranceexaminationis,Iwillencouragemyselftostruggletotheend.

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