My Problem600字作文

I am a middle school student, but with the growth of age, my troubles are becoming more and use my personality is very easy to get angry, so my classmates don't like me, I also want to change, but I can't control myself!

At this point, my mother gave me some advice. This is her advice: first, I want to change the relationship between me and my classmates. Secondly, when I want to get angry, I must think of the result of my anger. Third, I want to make my anger less and less. I keep doing this. Finally, I succeeded!

Everyone has trouble, don't be afraid, try to face and solve it!

修改後：

I am a middle school student. When I grow older and older, I have got more and more probelms. I am easy to become anry, so my classmates don't like me. I want to change, but I can't control myself. And I also don't know how to conrol myself.

I turned to ask my mom. She gave me some advice. When I want to get angry, I should think about the results. Then say to myself, it is alright, calm down. At the same time, take a deep breath. I keep doing this. Finally, I succeeded!
Everyone has different troubles, don't be afraid, try to face and solve them!

修改老師：Crystal 老師

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