會考英語作文範文 To be a lovely Shanghainese

To be a lovely Shanghainese(2003年上海市英語會考題)

審題：該題的重點在於闡述作爲一個可愛的上海人，我們關鍵應怎樣做？在2003年的考生作文中，有一部分同學發生了嚴重的偏題，把描述重點放在形容上海是怎樣的一個大都市，因此失分很多。由此看來，審題的準確是非常重要的。

學生作文：Shanghai is developing quickly everyday. Quite a few foreigners come to visit Shanghai. As the hosts of Shanghai, we must be lovely Shanghaineses to tell the visitors that Shanghai is an international city. To be a lovely Shanghainese, first, we should do our best to make the city more beautiful to show our enthusiasm. Next, we should be kind and friendly to everyone. We must do so to make our guests fell our zeal. Finally, we should study and work hard to rise our ability. Shanghai is developing and we should make progress to follow the epoch.