The Four Seasons1000字作文

Everyone kows that there are for seasons in a are Spring,summer,fall and let me yotellu about them. Spring is a warm the season,everything comes back to leaves start to turn is a good time to fly kite with friends. In summer,the temperature is very high so that the weather is very people like to go to swim in this it often rains,so you should remember to take an umbrella. In fall,the weather becomes cooler,and the days grow 's a good season for climbing use the leaves start to turn yellow. winter is very it often people can make people like to go to swim in this ybody should wear warm clothes because it often makes people fall ill. Which season do you like best ? Can you tell me ?

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Everyone knows that there are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, fall and winter. Now let me tell you something about them. Spring is a warm season. In spring, everything comes back to life. The leaves start to turn green. It is a good time to fly kites with friends. In summer, the temperature is very high so that the weather is very hot. Many people like going swimming in summer. And it often rains, so you'd better take an umbrella with fall, the weather becomes cooler, and the days grow shorter. It's a good season for climbing moutains. Because the leaves start to turn yellow. It is very cold in winter. And it often snows. So people can make snowmen. Everybody should wear warm clothes because it is easy to get a cold. Which season do you like best? Can you share with me?

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