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Hello, everyone! My name is Zhang Yiru. My English name is Sue. Now, I’m a Grade 6 student, studying in Tangjialing primary school. My hometown is Henan. It’s famous for the Shaolin Temple. I love my hometown very much. When I was three years old, I went to kindergarten. I had many friends there. I visited to Sichuan with my mother when I was five. We went there by train. It was a long journey. Sichuan it’s in the south of China. It’s famous for Mount Emei. I bought some souvenirs there. I had a good time. Luckily, when I was 7 years old, I had a chance to go to Russia. Russia is in the Asia and Europe. It’s famous for the Red Square. It’s the biggest country in the world. It’s beautiful. Now I’m 11 years old, my dream is become an English teacher. If I could be a teacher in the future, I will try my best to teach my students. That’s all. Thank you.
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　　大家好！我叫張一茹。我的英文名字是蘇。 我現在是一個6年級的學生，在唐家嶺國小學習。我的家鄉在河南。河南以少林寺而聞名。 我非常愛我的家鄉。當我三歲的時候就去上幼兒園。我有很多朋友。在我五歲的時候我和我媽媽去四川玩。我們坐火車去那裏。這是一個漫長的旅程。四川在中國的南部。以峨眉山而聞名。我買了一些紀念品。我玩得很開心。幸運的是，在我7歲的時候，我有機會去了俄羅斯。俄羅斯在亞洲和歐洲中間。它以紅場而出名。它是世界上最大的國家。它很美麗。我現在11歲了，我的夢想是成爲一名英語老師。如果將來我能成爲一名老師，我會盡我最大的努力去教我的學生。就這樣了，謝謝。