Dream250字作文

Dream
Used to be my fantasyAnd nowIs my goalIt may not be greatBut it's my goal in dreamWhere to targetDreamIs not a Bobbi dollIt's my dreamWhere hopeDreamIs no longer a fiction idealHas transformed into the power of my lifeNo dreamHow to power

修改後：

Dream

Used to be my fantasy

But now

Is what I want to be

It may not be great

But it's my goal as sure as fate

No dreams

What to target

Dream

Is not a barbie doll

It's what I want to do at all

No dreams

Where the hope is

Dream

Is no longer a fiction ideal

Has been transformed into the power of my life

No dreams

How to get strength

修改老師：

Andy老師

修改意見：

英文的詩歌體裁，需要押韻，言簡，但神需在！和中文詩歌不同，建議多閱讀一些英文詩歌，然後再進行創作~

七年級:思靈