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family TREE

There was once a little boy called Guy, and he was eight years old. He was in third grade; one day when he was at school, he found out that tomorrow was picture day, and so he had got to take a shower. And before he even got to think about picture day, his teacher Mrs. Creature, said that they were having a project, and it was all about their family.

The teacher said, “This project shall be today’s homework, and I want it to be perfect for I am going to tell your parents if you don’t do it.” Suddenly Guy’s sister Cally stood up and said, “Mrs. Creature, is it okay that I finish it on class?” “Sure thing Cally;” answered Mrs. Creature smiling, “But there is only a problem, it is that you must let your brother copy this report on your paper so that you could help him; then you will have to do another report of your own, or you’ll both fail!”

Cally and Guy apparently got home, and Cally said, “Mrs. Creature’s hates me…” “Yeah, it’s hilarious!” shouted Guy, “Let me just copy your paper and we’re done, okay?” “Ugh,” replied Cally; She reached her hand into her hand, and pulled out a piece of paper; and said, “This goes over every bone in my delicate body, but, careful; it’s hand written,” then Guy asked, “Is this gold ink paper?” then Cally shouted at him and said, “Anything happened to this paper and your family history ends right here pal!” and then she walked to her room.

Guy walked to the sofa and said, “My running is fast, I have nothing to worry about it;” then suddenly his father came with a paper shredder in his hands and said, “Hey Guy, check out my new paper shredder and…” He had barely finished when suddenly; Guy threw Cally’s report into the shredder by accident, and “Zzzzzzzz!” like that sound, Cally’s report was shredded. Guy called, “No!” then his dad was ashamed and said, “Oh, I guess it isn’t a good thing to walk around with this thing turned on;” and then he ran off with his legs behind his butt.

Suddenly, Guy’s body shook, and he turned into Shezow. He went to Sheila, his, or her, super computer, and said to her; “What’s wrong Sheila, I’m kind of busy around here and…”

“Dude, or should I say Shezow, this isn’t about your own business; because there is an emergency out there.

After a breath Sheila said to Guy, “Mega monkey is on the attack, and according to me he should be back in time.” Then Guy said, “Road trip! Time traveling!” then he hopped into the sheicel and drove off to time travel… He was excited.

She drove off right away. After that, she found some of the pass few Shezows. At last Sheila said to Shezow, “My scan is lining up like dynamite, follow that flapper!” shouted Sheila. Shezow followed it just as Sheila said, and found herself in the 1920s; “Wow, it looks like the 1920s,” said Maze, Guy’s brother. Then Shezow zoomed into a tornado.

When she opened her eyes, she found herself in 1924, the Shezow in that time saved her world from Mega monkey that had escaped not long before, and Sheila then said, “Quick, to the beginning!” then she allowed Shezow to drive to the beginning where they might save the day…

Shezow at last arrived at the beginning, and she stopped in time. At first a dinosaur was chasing her and was very, very frightened. But the Shezow in that time saved her, she was grateful; then she found her or his or Guy’s report there at the beginning Shezow’s lair…

The next day at school, when Guy’s report was handed out, he got an A+; and when Cally’s report was handed out, she got an A-…

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FAMILY TREE

There was once a little boy called Guy, and he was eight years old. He was in third grade; one day when he was at school, he found out that tomorrow was picture day, and so he had got to take a shower. And before he even got to think about picture day, his teacher Mrs. Creature, said that they were having a project, and it was all about their family.

The teacher said, “This project shall be today’s homework, and I want it to be perfect for I am going to tell your parents if you don’t do it.” Suddenly Guy’s sister Cally stood up and said, “Mrs. Creature, is it okay that I finish it on class?” “Sure thing Cally;” answered Mrs. Creature smiling, “But there is only one problem, it is that you must let your brother copy this report on your paper so that you could help him; then you will have to do another report of your own, or you’ll both fail!”

Cally and Guy apparently got home, and Cally said, “Mrs. Creature’s hates me…” “Yeah, it’s hilarious!” shouted Guy, “Let me just copy your paper and we’re done, okay?” “Ugh,” replied Cally; She reached her hand into her bag, and pulled out a piece of paper; and said, “This goes over every bone in my delicate body, but, careful; it’s hand written,” then Guy asked, “Is this gold ink paper?” then Cally shouted at him and said, “Anything happened to this paper and your family history ends right here pal!” and then she walked to her room.

Guy walked to the sofa and said, “My running is fast, I have nothing to worry about it;” then suddenly his father came with a paper shredder in his hands and said, “Hey Guy, check out my new paper shredder and…” He had barely finished when suddenly; Guy threw Cally’s report into the shredder by accident, and “Zzzzzzzz!” like that sound, Cally’s report was shredded. Guy called, “No!” then his dad was ashamed and said, “Oh, I guess it isn’t a good thing to walk around with this thing turned on;” and then he ran off with his legs behind his butt.

Suddenly, Guy’s body shook, and he turned into Shezow. He went to Sheila, his, or her, super computer, and said to her; “What’s wrong Sheila, I’m kind of busy around here and…”

“Dude, or should I say Shezow, this isn’t about your own business; because there is an emergency out there.

After a breath Sheila said to Guy, “Mega monkey is on the attack, and according to me he should be back in time.” Then Guy said, “Road trip! Time traveling!” then he hopped into the sheicel and drove off to time travel… He was excited.

She drove off right away. After that, she found some of the pass few Shezows. At last Sheila said to Shezow, “My scan is lining up like dynamite, follow that flapper!” shouted Sheila. Shezow followed it just as Sheila said, and found herself in the 1920s; “Wow, it looks like the 1920s,” said Maze, Guy’s brother. Then Shezow zoomed into a tornado.

When she opened her eyes, she found herself in 1924, the Shezow in that time saved her world from Mega monkey that had escaped not long before, and Sheila then said, “Quick, to the beginning!” then she allowed Shezow to drive to the beginning where they might save the day…

Shezow at last arrived at the beginning, and she stopped in time. At first a dinosaur was chasing her and was very, very frightened. But the Shezow in that time saved her, she was grateful; then she found her or his or Guy’s report there at the beginning Shezow’s lair…

The next day at school, when Guy’s report was handed out, he got an A+; and when Cally’s report was handed out, she got an A-…

四年級:歐陽雨鷺