spring750字作文

Barefoot into the fieldssuddenly turn round
Embrace spring
Listen
Swallow twittering in
Orioles Singing
The grass is whispering
Flowers in the shallow sing
overlook
Peach put on makeup
Apricot raised white sand
The Chinese flowering crab has a pink dress.
The wind blows over
The heart of a comfortable
The river is dressing up for the earth.
The birds build their nests in the trees.
The blue sky
The girl's spring dress
It is fresh.
That is elegant.
That's tender.
That is beautiful
The beauty of spring
The most limpid eyes looked
The beauty of spring
The most beautiful poem to chant
The beauty of spring
The most beautiful song to chant
The beauty of spring
The most noble soul to feel
Oh, spring
Let me in your arms
It turned into a most unique beauty of peach blossom

修改後：
Barefoot into the fields suddenly turn round
Embrace spring
Listen
Swallow twittering in
Orioles Singing
The grass whispering
Flowers in the shallow singing
Look
Peach blossom in pink
Apricot in white
The wind blows over
The heart of a comfort
The river is dressing up for the earth.
The birds are building their nests in the trees.
The blue sky
The girl's spring dress
That is fresh.
That is elegant.
That is tender.
That is beautiful
The beauty of spring
The most limpid eyes to look
The beauty of spring
The most beautiful poem to chant
The beauty of spring
The most beautiful song to sing
The beauty of spring
The most noble soul to feel
Oh, spring
Let me in your arms

修改老師： Crystal 老師

七年級:陳靖