Hug in spring300字範例作文
- 六年級
- 關注:2.68W次
like spring. I want to embrace the spring. Touch the flowers, lying on the grass, smelling the fragrance of flowers, feel the thick tree, feel the embrace of spring, I want to embrace the spring. Rain, I want to feel the spring rain, feel the spring, spring, ah, let me into your warm embrace it! I like spring!
修改後:
I like spring. I want to embrace the spring. I want to touch the flowers, lie on the grass, smell the fragrance of flowers, and feel the thick trees. I want to feel the spring rain, too. Let me run into the warm embrace of spring! I like spring!
修改老師:Crystal 老師六年級:潘子瑤
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