My Winter holiday550字作文

I really had an interesting and short winter the January 23rd,it snowed in ChongQing.I felt surpised and happy.I quickly went out I accompanied with my little sister to build a 's a good ng winter holiday,I always got up at 11o ' I had breakfast and lunch at half past r that,I did dishs and did my i went shopping with my friends and we drunk afternoon tea togther.I like sports very ng winter holiday.I often run in use it can help me to bulid my a word,I'm very happy on holiday.

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I really had an interesting but short winter holiday.

On the January 23rd, it snowed in ChongQing. I felt surpised and happy. I quickly went out of the house. And I made a snowman with my little sister. Then we had a snowball fight. Although it was cold, we both felt very happy.

During winter holiday, I always got up at 11o 'clock. After lunch, Idid thedishes and did my homework. If my friends came to see me, we always went shopping and had afternoon tea togther.

I also did sports during winter holiday. I often did a morning run. Because it can help me to bulid my strength.

In a word, I had a nice winter holiday.

修改老師：Andy老師

高一:秦瑤